04-02-2008, 01:50 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: USA D: Posts: 2,499
GPoints: 428 Rep Power: 8 | Well this is pretty good, it isn't a very original idea for a story but it could get better once you write more. I want to see what happens so post when you write more 
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