| I'll tell you why no one has been able to really finish reading this yet:
1. That first paragraph is a gigantic block. You need to separate it somehow because its a real bitch to try to read.
2. Its written in a very stream-of-consciousness way which can be very interesting but difficult to read because the flow of the sentences can be choppy, nonsensical, or unneeded. Kind of like the sentence I just wrote, eh! Run-on, much?
On a side note, I imagine the story is narrated by someone with a snobby British man. At least from what little I have managed to read. I'll give it another go in the morning and see if I can finish it, but at the time being it seems near impossible.
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Originally Posted by Kyo GTFO everyone, I'm the artistic genius here, I'll draw you however the hell I feel like drawing you. Benita, you've got a mustache, now you have rockets for legs, and now you're a frog called frank. | Fewmitz! Quote:
Originally Posted by Fewmitz  DEM DAMN APPLE PICKIN' GYPSIES | Quote:
Originally Posted by LordGrievous So Benita, since you can get pregnant twice...wanna come over....and.....stuff? | | 
