| It's good for a second attempt at this and the low quality of the stock which was bound to make your vector a bit nasty looking but you should try and rough out the bumpiness you have in there. I see you kept making little cuts in the image with your pen tooling, whatever your method is that forces you to do this I recommend you stop so as to improve the overall image.
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