| Despite my thoughts about why you would be thinking about marriage let alone knives or how you could fuck up your life at the age of 14 when you have 70 more years to add on to it, it was a good start if you are just looking at the word choice and flow as opposed to the content.
Your ABAB was on and you had good meter and tempo so if I was not put off by this sort of 'poetry' I'd say job well done. Keep writing. | 
