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Originally Posted by FireWrath  There's too much I dislike about this. There's no pattern at all, and by that I mean no stanzas, couplets, actual rhyme scheme. Your choice of word also could have been better. Perhaps in a better style, or maybe just a breaking it down to a few stanzas and alter a bunch of things here and there and it could be decent. |
kk, whats a stanza? i missed poetry in class last week.
