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Originally Posted by lil

M ainly when the sun begins to set,
A new day begins when all is dark.
L onely in the shadows I walk throughout the night,
E very sound in my head tingling in the back of my mind.
D ifferent voices, too many voices and
I hear them deep in my lack of true slumber.
C horuses of idiocy ringing like a bell,
T olls of achy noise that I cannot stand.
I yet long for you, but deep inside I hate you,
O h I would love the taste of your blood but
N o one knows how I feel... My love, Bella.



(You will only understand that if you've read Twilight because that's what I just wrote that describing the way Edward feels towards his life and Bella Swan. Also, read the book that "is in Edward's point of view" to fully understand it. It's on Stephenie Meyer's website.)

Really great, I've read all of the books that are out and that can definitely show Edward's feelings. Also malediction is a perfect word for your poem.