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[Husky]

Basically a poem that involves a vampire, thoughtless caring, and hidden affection.


I finished the basic storyline, but I'll be sure to add more to it after it's been critiqued.



I personally love the last two lines that I wrote. It's something about the alliteration. If you don't get the end, read through it. I know there are some things I need to clarify, which I'll get to eventually.





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That blinding light is my only true enemy.
The heat and the rays are one single monosemy.
Though when the sun sets, right under that landscape,
I couldn't wait for that darkness to undrape.

Creeping into the secnery I sniff a being somewhere near.
All I can think about is it's blood- So tangy, so clear.
While I follow my keen sense of smell, I see a pretty face,
For just a second there, I sensationalize a feeling I cannot chase.

I watched from the corner, I saw the sadness in her eyes.
As I saw my own self sitting there… a part of me dies.
That one mistake in life is letting it all go,
I want to come out and be her friend, not her foe.

My courage uplifts me to come out and share
Why she should be thinking it over and why she should care.
She seemed startled and cautious, but not the least bit scared.
My hidden canines were pushed into my bottom lip, but the pain I bared.

She had the first word, asking who I was and why I was there.
I told her it wasn’t important, as my bottom lip’s skin started to tear.
The anger of her tears filled my body and I wanted to shout
That anger transformed into a seemingly steady little pout.

I had to get through to her that her choice was not right.
She was talking to a stranger about suicide yet did not feel uptight.
She must’ve gotten tired of me, or just plain annoyed.
Though seemingly angry, she was the one I convoyed.

Her emotions seemed mixed, but soon they became clear,
A curved smile and rested arms looked enticingly sincere.
As she turned her petite head and rounded the corner
Two sharp canines were seen in the mouth of the mourner.