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08-14-2008, 10:36 AM

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Pandox

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I'm not a writing-guru... But when I read this,
It didn't seem like I was reading poetry?
It felt like I was reading a random MySpace bulletin.

Try working on the length and making it more fluid?

I'd like to see your other works
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