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11-13-2007, 04:30 PM
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"Daisy Buchanan"
"I am not your king, you will not enjoy this."
Drag your body pouring poison from your lips. Your wounds are deep into others. Toxic. Crack open your skull, destroy the memories. Cut apart your chest to take out your heart, take back what's mine. Greedily, you take all you can. TAKE TAKE TAKE TAKE - FUCK YOU - The careless lie while the caring die. Doomed to suffer for my own sincerity. You motherfucking WHORE. You pretty little fool.
Pissed and bored in detention. I know it was not meant to rhyme or be all poetic or anything. Just inkin' the paper. This was made for Grindcore music so yeah, I wrote it that way. Only thought that really went into this was the "Daisy Buchanan". That's a character from the novel "The Great Gatsby". She is this careless women who doesn't know what she wants and is a greedy bitch pretty much who tries to have everything. The last line "You pretty little fool" is in reference with the novel when she says she hopes that her daughter be a "pretty little fool'. Oh, and the first part is suppose to be a spoken quote from the movie 300 when the guy rapes the Queen. I don't remember exactly how it went, but it was something like that. Meh.
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11-13-2007, 05:49 PM
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| Vagenius 
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Especially if your homicidal for her.
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Originally Posted by Tara Gilesbie Sudenly a gothic old man flu in on his broomstick. He had lung black hair and a looong black bread. He wus werring a blak robe dat sed ‘avril lavigne’ on da back. He shotted a spel and Vlodemort ran away. It was…………………………………DUMBLYDO RE! | | |
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11-13-2007, 05:53 PM
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Tis absolutely horrid, I know.
I just thought of the idea of Daisy Buchanan and naming it a song and relating a certain whore to her. I'll make an actual song later.
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Originally Posted by Fewmitz Do more drugs to avoid the come down from all of the drugs?
Virus, your logic is flawless. | Current Anime Watchlist:
Elfen Lied - FINISHED T_T <3
D.Gray-Man - Up To Episode 45
Digimon Season 1 - Ep 2 | |
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11-13-2007, 05:59 PM
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| Vagenius
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GPoints: 2,728 Rep Power: 24 | Then rent a song studio get some more ppl and then post it on youtube.
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Originally Posted by Tara Gilesbie Sudenly a gothic old man flu in on his broomstick. He had lung black hair and a looong black bread. He wus werring a blak robe dat sed ‘avril lavigne’ on da back. He shotted a spel and Vlodemort ran away. It was…………………………………DUMBLYDO RE! | | |
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11-13-2007, 06:00 PM
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Originally Posted by Fewmitz Do more drugs to avoid the come down from all of the drugs?
Virus, your logic is flawless. | Current Anime Watchlist:
Elfen Lied - FINISHED T_T <3
D.Gray-Man - Up To Episode 45
Digimon Season 1 - Ep 2 | |
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11-13-2007, 06:05 PM
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| Vagenius
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Slums of Shaolin Age: 12 Posts: 10,089
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YOU'LL BE MOSH, INSTEAD OF SMOSH.
TOOK ME AWHILE TO COME UP WITH THAT
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Originally Posted by Tara Gilesbie Sudenly a gothic old man flu in on his broomstick. He had lung black hair and a looong black bread. He wus werring a blak robe dat sed ‘avril lavigne’ on da back. He shotted a spel and Vlodemort ran away. It was…………………………………DUMBLYDO RE! | | |
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11-13-2007, 06:08 PM
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Originally Posted by Fewmitz Do more drugs to avoid the come down from all of the drugs?
Virus, your logic is flawless. | Current Anime Watchlist:
Elfen Lied - FINISHED T_T <3
D.Gray-Man - Up To Episode 45
Digimon Season 1 - Ep 2 | |
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11-13-2007, 06:09 PM
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CRUISE CONTROL COOL.
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Originally Posted by Tara Gilesbie Sudenly a gothic old man flu in on his broomstick. He had lung black hair and a looong black bread. He wus werring a blak robe dat sed ‘avril lavigne’ on da back. He shotted a spel and Vlodemort ran away. It was…………………………………DUMBLYDO RE! | | |
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11-13-2007, 07:13 PM
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11-13-2007, 08:05 PM
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Originally Posted by Fewmitz Do more drugs to avoid the come down from all of the drugs?
Virus, your logic is flawless. | Current Anime Watchlist:
Elfen Lied - FINISHED T_T <3
D.Gray-Man - Up To Episode 45
Digimon Season 1 - Ep 2 | |
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