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Old 05-29-2008, 09:40 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Boredom Pyramids

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The reason for the dashes are to show the actual pyramids. I wouldn't exactly call these poems, but they seem like they fit in this section. I'm more than likely to delete this thread later, it was just something to do for the time being.
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Old 05-30-2008, 09:24 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Wordplay is perfectly valid as poetry.

Though the first one dips in the centre. xD
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your one pyramid is caving in it seems...
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your one pyramid is caving in it seems...
Yeah, that's because it wasn't supposed to be an even pyramid,"Repetitive" was supposed to be the peak of it, and everything else should have just gone down, and it does by the letter count. The semi colon after "annoyed" messed it up because it's a character that takes up a space, but the pyramid is based on letters per line, as opposed to characters.
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well explained, can anyone else make one?
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