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Old 02-06-2008, 12:16 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A Few Poems

Lies

Everyone is surrouned by the lies they create
Lies are what destroy us from within
And we are unaware of this process
No one has purely told nothing but truth


Lies surround he air we breathe
And the air we give helps it grow
The lies grow larger with each new
And there is nothing we can do.

All we can do is hope and wish
That the entire world will change
And start to be honest
But only few can do that

I've tried and failed
But yet I try and try again
You'll have to true too my friends
We have to try to fix this problem that we all face.


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Anger


All this Anger inside
It is far too high
It will be let loose
And someone will die


Everyone helps this anger grow
Why won't they leave me alone
ONe day they shall all pay
What the day comes I will explode

They will only hope that I have mercy
They show me none yet the expect some
I will not show what they did't
As they fall to the ground


My Anger still grows
As my adrenaline flows
They al cry their bloody tears
As I fall into their greatest fears

But until then
My Anger grows
I will not show mercy
One day they shall all pay

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Pain


There is nothing quite like this pain.
Nothing can takes its place.
We cut our wrists
And we hope to die.


And we hope that this cutting
Will cease the pain
But it only adds more
It adds to others and theirs

We wish to bleed
We wish to die
But only pain comes
As we sit and cry

Around us we have friends who care
But they dont know what we go through
We have pain, there, and everywhere.
No one can solve this pain.

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I love your peom's eprescially pain it's a good one
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Hmmm... I like them. Could use some improvement.
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all three poems are great, but seeing how you wrote them, i am positive if you spend a bit more time you can fine tune it and make it flow better. I know you are capable, just required some more time. =) i love anger =)
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Old 02-15-2008, 02:45 PM   #7 (permalink)
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All of the poems where exciteing to me I really love them
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