Flippity Flop

[ZombieQueenCoffee]

I haven't been here in a long time. >.> But I am alive!! I was here back on page 5. Haha. Here :l

Flippity Flop

Flippity flop,
what a drop!

Flippity flop,
where's my top?

Flippity flop,
my head's gonna pop!

Flippity flop,
is that a cop?

Flippity flop,
I hear a knock.

Flippity flop,
did you hit me with that mop?

Flippity flop,
teenaged boys just wanna fwap.*

Flippty flop,
how high can you hop?

Flippy flop,
God damn I better stop.

Flippy flo--FUCK YOU.

~End~

Just random poem about someone who doesn't like rhyme, like me.

* In case you don't know, it's a term for jack off.

[FireWrath]

I'm not a fan of this at all, in fact, I wouldn't even call this a poem. It has no story, no meaning, no moral. It constantly changes length, nothing you wrote relates at all, and it has no consistency at all, other than the fact that everything rhymes. All you did was write random phrases, that simply happened to rhyme with the word "flop." Children in the second grade are taught to do that, so it's nothing I would be proud of.

[mekret]

wow harsh..

[Fortunato]

The rhyme scheme breaks in several areas, and the poem itself just doesn't flow very well... If anything, this is a list of rhymes, but not really a poem. To me, it lacks a certain artistry and meaning; it tries to be a poem, but doesn't quite come close enough.