Free Write

[Deezo]

Okay So this is my first go. Delete my post if I mess the flow of the thread up.

She was beautiful. I had seen her a couple times in the past. Just a brisk walking past and she had always caught my attention. How I longed for her to notice me with just one quick glance. But how would I even know if she was glancing as I was too shy to even look at her because of the fear that she would think I was a creep. So I see her again, my blood is intoxicated and therefore the courage is present. I walk towards her trying to make my steps seem cool. I am literally two paces from her now and the going gets tough. I stroll right by her like I always do. Not a glance at her, just lost hope.

[Hodizzle]

I think alot of people are missing the point of the thread. The point isn't to be "good" or follow anything else anyone else has written (though you can if you like), it's simply an exercise using a prompt to write until you're simply out of ideas. Thank you to everyone who has been participating.

[Deezo]

She was beautiful. Her eyes were pearl green and her lips were glowing. I admired the look of her flowery dress as it soothed my eyes while it waived around in the breeze. She gave me that childlike feeling of excitement, the rush through your fingers that you get sometimes, she gave me it all.

[Hodizzle]

She was beautiful in a way that simple cannot be described in words. It wasn't a purely physical beauty either. Honestly, she was a bit homely- a little overweight, with slightly large, harsh features, but there was something about her that made you fall in love with her instantly. It sounds so cliche, but she had an inner glow almost and a seductively attractive smell. She could lure you in like no other woman, but when you found yourself thinking about her later, you couldn't figure out why. She was the kind of girl that you would probably flirt with after a few drinks, as closing time neared and you became desperate for company for the night. At least, if you only considered her looks. But if you saw her in person, you would find yourself gradually moving closer to her. Once you were close enough to talk, the aroma would overtake you, and she would be in your arms in minutes. It would be the strangest thing you had ever felt in your life and completely unexplainable.

[Breze]

She was beautiful... That was all he needed. Sure it was shallow, but there was just something about how beautiful she was that told you there was something beneath the surface. There was a truly intriguing personality. Unlike the shallow qualities he thought he had himself. It was truly love, and it had been sense he first laid eyes on her. His gut told him to blindly dive in. From that first instant he knew she was all that he had been searching for in his crazy nightmares. She was what they had said he would never have. But that was back in high school. Back when everyone but him and the guy who never showered were the definition of cool.

What is cool? I pondered for a moment before reaching my conclusion. Cool is fake. It's thinking that you are just that much better than the world around you. Self-centered, over-fluffed ego, petty, incompetent, all of which are words that come to mind. She is cool, but under a different definition. Maybe it's not even cool that describes her. that's just it. She's indescribable.

It's funny how my mind wanders...What does this say about me? I think that's the reason I fell in love with her. She keeps me on track. Everything is so clear when I am around her. I want her. She fills the void in my heart when I feel alone. I know it's not just a silly fling. This is true, I feel the passion flaring up within me. I need to feel her within my arms. The longing is almost unbearable. I can not resist. Of course I must wait. She has to feel the same way about me right? She just has to. I have waited too long for her. My soul mate. The someone who make life worth living.

[Deezo]

She was beautiful, she left me with nothing to say
She was that kind of girl who could just brighten up your day
She would not even have to try it would come so easy
She would just have to walk by and my heartbeat would become uneasy
She would brush her hair back into the wind
She would never be the type of girl too have sinned

I would just like this beautiful girl to let me in her life
I would just dream of making her my wife
I would treat her so well, I would buy her flowers
I would be romantic and run us hot showers

But lets be real, me and her will never exist,
I am just the boy who never has kissed.

[Hodizzle]

Prompt updated.

[Deezo]

The noise in the distance was closing in,
The high pitched ringing was making my head spin,
The car was approaching and travelling fast,
It was just seconds before the big blast,
Under age drivers losing control,
Here I am hoping not to join the death toll,
I close my eyes and start to pray,
That I will live to see another day,
The car collides into me I feel it in my bones,
I start to give out load moans,
The lights around me start to get dark,
Is this the end of my life's spark?

[DarkenedSky]

The noise in the distance seemed so faint to those two huddled shadows on the train. With each track that passed under them, that soft and faint, "wam wam wam wam wam", their hearts lit up just a small bit more. Only once they were sure they were far away from where they had hopped on, did they dare to take off their hoods and cloaks.

One pair of deep blue eyes, wavering like the top of a midnight ocean, gazed deeply into another. Two sets of light pink lips rose from their sides as translucent tears slipped across and on the sides of them, leaving small dirt smudges. They were finally free. Free to do as they pleased, so long as this train didn't stop. So long as someone didn't find that they were stowaways. So long...as they could get away.

The younger of the two, still gazing upwards and into her older sister's eyes, then looked down and launched herself at her sister's chest, wrapping her arms tightly around her waist as she cried heavily against her sister's bosom.

"Calm down, Alice", said the older sister, "I'm right here. We're safe now. I hope." At this, Alice felt her throat swallow hard, on its own, as she stammered her words between sniffles, "B-but...they...they will come looking for --", but she was cut short. "That's enough! I got us this far, didn't I? We'll be long gone before they find out", said the older sister.

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Too tired to write out anymore, haha...

[Zombie]

Looking up from my laptop, the faint glow of the screen the only light in my dark room, I listened to the faint taps of the rain that hit against my window. That beautiful sound in the distance was usually what made me sleep on restless nights like these, but tonight my head was filled with thoughts.

The past week had been horrible and no matter how much I just wanted to forget about the feelings and push them all aside, at night they would come back to me, haunting me.. Taunting me. I'm sure the Gods were trying to punish me, but for what?

Rubbing the back of my neck, I turned my head back to the laptop, tired eyes gazing towards the two blinking bars at the bottom of my screen. People wanting to talk to me, to make me tell them what was wrong.. Did I really want to tell them what was wrong? Heck, did I even UNDERSTAND wha was wrong? I wasn't sure anyore.

Without even thinking, I clicked each flashing bar and exited out of the windows withour reading the words. It wasn't the first time I had done that and even though I felt bad, I didn't want them pestering me about it.

After a few moments of just staring at the screeon, ignoring one of the flashing bars that returned, I closed my laptop down and laid back in my bed, staring at the ceiling, listening to the rain..

I loved that sound.