Noted Love

[FireWrath]

Quite frankly Bunneh, I'll take your word over the professor's, for some of his knowledge is let's just say questionable. I was taught that Prose Poetry had to be more of a stanza rather than a paragraph, so thank you for that explanation.

As for you Shadowdemonx9, I'm not sure if I would have two separate parts of your poem like that. Granted that they are related, and the second one refers to the other, but perhaps writing the first one in the same fashion as you wrote second one would take away that odd feeling that it's two different pieces of work. Though I still say it's not a bad job, maybe it's my dislike in that kind of style of poetry that makes it seem less enjoyable :/

[Shadowdemonx9]

Hehe alright I'll try my best to make it feel less uneasy for you.. Heh I just like expressing my poems as much as possible... Since I really wanted you to see how you can represent one thing two seperate ways... Like love... can be expressed many ways... And for the style I only used two but I explained how love is different.. or something like that... But I'll try to do better next time.

[FireWrath]

I'm not saying it's bad, it just seems a bit odd for me to see two completely different styles being called one poem. To me it's like taking a picture modern art and classic art, and calling that a single piece of work.

[Shadowdemonx9]

Well..I did take a picture I took today and made it look old... But its still considered modern since I took it today....But then again I think thats one different thing.

[skittlesgreycat]

For some reason I really love the ellipses...anyways, I could definitely relate to some of the statements about love. I would just suggest maybe including more detail/specificity to get readers connected

[Shadowdemonx9]

I don't know I could try. I mean its not often I actually have time to write since I'm usually doing something else. This just came into my head so I posted it.

[skittlesgreycat]

Heh I know what you mean, time is definitely hard on people...but I commend you for writing down your thoughts, wish I could share mine, but it may creep everyone out ;)

[Dixie]

To romantic, that "honeymoon feeling" never lasts in my opinion and experience.