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Old 05-20-2008, 08:18 PM   #1 (permalink)
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those eyes.

seeing you again makes my skin crawl
how you glare at me with those eyes.
i want to keep you forever as our love is unfaithful
do you want to run away baby from this untitled place?
can you pick me up in that bridal style and watch your girlfriend
break her neck?
or shall we keep shut about our secret meeting and let feelings
consume us?.
I'll love you no matter what even watching you kiss her
but you do the same when you see his picture in my locket.
just tell me one thing, sweetheart?
why are you with someone who drives you to anger?
and I always have to make you laugh?
bringing up the good ol days,
when we were together
do i have to stare into those eyes
who makes my skin crawl?.

(a little poem from a story i am writing atm)
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Old 05-20-2008, 08:23 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very nice. ^_^
I had no idea you were so fond of my eyes.
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Very nice. ^_^
I had no idea you were so fond of my eyes.
thankies joe XD
its about the guys eyes in the story
but you got cute eyes
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demona=infinite
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Demona=Toughest Biscuit on the Block.
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Old 05-20-2008, 08:27 PM   #4 (permalink)
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It's very rare that I show my eyes.
I'm not really a "People Person"
And it helps me sleep in class. :P
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ohhhh thats bad sleeping in class
anywho i am glad you like the poem ^-^
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so...whats up?
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Old 06-19-2008, 01:47 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Best poem I read on this site so far...
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Wow, Thats a good Poem.
I got a short Quote/Poem I made when I was grounded for a month.

Here Goes...

Happiness Is Like Peeing Your Pants
Everyone Can See It
But Only You Can Feel The Warmth
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thanks you guys <3
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"yeah like the guitar of Demona "
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demona=infinite
demona's lips=infinite
Demona, you pretty much got me either way.
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Demona=Toughest Biscuit on the Block.
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Originally Posted by Emo husky;
Demona is for the win.
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puppy thinks to herself:"I wonder if they make demona flavored ramen"
so...whats up?
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WHAT IS LOVE!!!? BABY DON'T HURT ME!!! NO MORE!!....I imagine slitting my wrist to this song! T-T
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