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04-18-2008, 07:04 PM
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Wilfukguys is offline
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: MWHAHAHHAHA Age: 18 Posts: 5,299 Rep Power: 0 | [Wrtiting Request] Well I want to make a really nice description for one of my roleplay characters i play on a mud. However i suck at making a very detailed descriptions and very intriguing ones. So i come to you writers for some aid. Can one of yo umake me a very detailed description? Heres the details of my orc warrior:
~ Speaks Pig-Latin
~ Orc Warrior
~ Name is Kirat
Here I would like you to include:
~ Background (where he came from,ect)
~ His Goals in life
~ What he wishes to become
~ Height
~ Weight
~ Any body features
As you can tell from what i want from his description, i will also be looking at it as a roleplay. SO yeah, can anyone do this for me? +8 rep and luffs ^_^ | |
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04-18-2008, 07:12 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Combotown Posts: 1,886 Rep Power: 0 | I am a Ogre named Kirat. I come from the land of Wellis. I speak pig-Latin and that is what my whole generation speaks, and very famous for it. My generation of the family tree is the "savage" branch. We are the most greedy,stiff, and evil branch. My goals in life are to conquer and destroy the other race in the world. My biggest rival are the elves. I hate how they enchant all those trees and fairies. It makes me feel disgusted. I wish to be come the King of Wellis one day and make my generation proud of me. Most people fear me by the way I look. I stand at 8ft and weigh about a good 400lbs. My lips have piercings and one in my ear. My skin color is a dark green, and it helps me in battle so I can camouflage. My favorite tactics in battle are archery. I am very skillful when using the bow. I will assassinate anyone who stands in my way. People fear me, and I will not fear.
1st grade description x3 | |
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04-18-2008, 07:22 PM
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Wilfukguys is offline
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: MWHAHAHHAHA Age: 18 Posts: 5,299 Rep Power: 0 | eeek forgot to mention it needs to be LONG xD
EDIT: Also use only the following weapons in the description:
~Mace
~Sword
~Dagger
~Staff
Also theres a chance to land a brutality hit if there is nay use for that. Hometowns is named Langois
Last edited by Wilfukguys; 04-18-2008 at 07:24 PM.
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04-18-2008, 07:23 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Combotown Posts: 1,886 Rep Power: 0 | Well, screw that. Thats all I can do or think of xD | |
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04-18-2008, 07:29 PM
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Wilfukguys is offline
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: MWHAHAHHAHA Age: 18 Posts: 5,299 Rep Power: 0 | awww D=
thanks for trying | |
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04-18-2008, 07:42 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Pattaya Posts: 203 Rep Power: 2 | I could write something up, but I would need far more detail. (e.g. brief descriptions about his past, his hometown, his overall build and appearance, and perhaps his fighting style.)
Something like this would be appropriate? Character Information: Real Name: Alias: Eye Color: Hair Color: Height: Weight: Orientation: Affiliation: Age: Basic Physical Description: Personality: Abilities/ talents: Basic History:
It'd be easier to help you out. | |
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04-18-2008, 08:02 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: MWHAHAHHAHA Age: 18 Posts: 5,299 Rep Power: 0 | Real Name: Kirat (No last name)
Alias: (None)
Eye Color: Red
Hair Color: Brown
Height: 6 ft
Weight: 180 pounds
Orientation: Neutral
Affiliation: (What? )
Age: (Doesnt need to be included as they actually grow older in the game)
Basic Physical Description: Pig-like face. black-skin. Medium-Build
Personality: Neutral personality. Doesnt take side of good or evil
Abilities/ talents: Trained in the arts of all weapons listed above
Basic History: Born of a father who was killed in war and of a slave mother. Make up some shit from there? xD
Heres the help file from the game on orcs:
ORC
Orcs were the most successful creations of the sapphists. They are the one
race that most rivals humans, though dwarves and orcs tend to attack each
other on sight as well. They are stronger and heartier then humans, though
slightly dumber. They are known for their bloodlust and brutality- they tend
to strike harder then their strength entails. Orcs are invariably evil in their
very core, and suffer penalties if they are not evil. Orcs tend to have
porcine features, dark skin, and tusks. Their skin ranges from dark green
to black- with a wide variety of earth shades. | |
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