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08-25-2008, 10:11 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: USA D: Posts: 2,500
GPoints: 450 Rep Power: 8 | PoTW #10 Winner! This week's winner is Hodizzle! Quote: |
Originally Posted by Hodizzle | Quote: |
Originally Posted by Hodizzle He was born in the Big Apple
At the end of the nineteenth century.
He was just one of nine children,
But his parents were proud as they could be.
He was just a little boy
Born to a seamstress and a barber,
Who knew what he would become
And what cruelty he could harbor.
Oh, Scarface, oh Capone, Public Enemy Number 1,
A legend in his time and a master with a gun.
No one had any idea the havoc he could wreak,
Or that his bootleg empire would control all that was weak.
But who knew that in due time, he’d fall not by another man,
But because of a youthful mistake; death by his own hand.
With a mentor like Torrio,
He learned the ways of the streets well.
Prohibition was his time,
And this Italian knew what to sell.
Torrio got a bit spooked,
And the business went to Scarface.
Al Capone was his name,
Chicago, Illinois was the place.
Oh, Scarface, oh Capone, Public Enemy Number 1,
A legend in his time and a master with a gun.
No one had any idea the havoc he could wreak,
Or that his bootleg empire would control all that was weak.
But who knew that in due time, he’d fall not by another man,
But because of a youthful mistake; death by his own hand.
Through gambling and prostitution,
This notorious man made his cash,
But by selling moonshine,
Was the real way he built up his stash.
It was at about this time
That “Bugs” Moran comes into the story.
The frightened Al Capone
Started the massacre that is his glory.
Oh, Scarface, oh Capone, Public Enemy Number 1,
A legend in his time and a master with a gun.
No one had any idea the havoc he could wreak,
Or that his bootleg empire would control all that was weak.
But who knew that in due time, he’d fall not by another man,
But because of a youthful mistake; death by his own hand.
He couldn’t stay on top for long,
For the police were hard on his trail.
Tax evasion was his crime,
Spending six of his years in jail.
Soon after he was released
And his name was dragged through the mud,
The man that had defied dead,
Was killed by nothing but his own “bad blood.”
Oh, Scarface, oh Capone, Public Enemy Number 1,
A legend in his time and a master with a gun.
No one had any idea the havoc he could wreak,
Or that his bootleg empire would control all that was weak.
But who knew that in due time, he’d fall not by another man,
But because of a youthful mistake; death by his own hand. | Nice job, and the next PoTW should be out tomorrow.
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08-25-2008, 02:02 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Hwaseong, South Korea Age: 22 Posts: 1,273
GPoints: 306 Rep Power: 4 | Yippee! I honestly didn't expect to win, but awesome  . | |
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08-25-2008, 02:03 PM
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Join Date: May 2007 Location: Bahamas Age: 19 Posts: 1,276
GPoints: 194 Rep Power: 8 | Congrats, Ho. | |
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08-25-2008, 02:04 PM
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GPoints: 450 Rep Power: 8 | Now you get your very own spot in the Hall Of Fame, you must feel special! 
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08-25-2008, 02:06 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Hwaseong, South Korea Age: 22 Posts: 1,273
GPoints: 306 Rep Power: 4 | I do, I do ;). | |
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08-25-2008, 03:10 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: NY REPRESENT~ Posts: 2,039
GPoints: 3,412 Rep Power: 7 | Congratulations, yours was very well written.
Remind me never to write a ballad again.
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08-25-2008, 03:28 PM
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Join Date: May 2007 Location: Bahamas Age: 19 Posts: 1,276
GPoints: 194 Rep Power: 8 | ^ Same XD | |
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08-26-2008, 12:42 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Preston Age: 15 Posts: 2,726
GPoints: 1,354 Rep Power: 9 | Quote:
Originally Posted by DarkenedSky Congrats, Ho. | lol@that
Yea, grats it's a good poem.
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08-26-2008, 10:02 PM
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Join Date: May 2008 Age: 17 Posts: 343
GPoints: 451 Rep Power: 2 | Congrats! It's an awesome poem ^^
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08-27-2008, 05:17 AM
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Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: East Coast, USA Age: 24 Posts: 269
GPoints: 105 Rep Power: 3 | Very well written and even fun to read! Congratz, and you deserve it. 
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