POTW #6!

[sidespin]

Since the Summer Fest writing competitions are over, it's time for another POTW!

Last week's entries were very good, so this week is going to be another odd format for your poems xD.

This week the first letter of each line of your poem must be in order with your name. (The name you use can be your GG name or your real name).

For example:

Sun is fun
I like to read
Dogs eat food
Elephants are big
Sideways roads
Pinapples are sour
In the room
Never eat yellow snow


(NOTE: That was not an actual poem! Your's has to be better )


This is like WoW, but I want these to be better since this is an actual competition!


Good luck,

Sidespin


Note: All discussion here please http://www.gaminggutter.com/forum/f2...ead-48384.html

[Fewmitz]

Am I judging again?

Also, PM Goog or Tyler.

[sidespin]

Originally Posted by Fewmitz

Am I judging again?

Also, PM Goog or Tyler.

If you'd like sure, you can judge every week.

And Ok, I will.

[Fewmitz]

I'll judge every week I...remember.

[Cyrus]

If I judge am I allowed to enter?

[Fewmitz]

No.

[sidespin]

Originally Posted by Fewmitz

I'll judge every week I...remember.

Ok that's good, normaly it's just me and Bunneh.

And I can always remind you xD.

[Cyrus]

Well then, can I be a judge Side? Or do you not need another? Otherwise I will just enter.

[sidespin]

I have no idea if your a good judge , but if you'd like to then you can I suppose. You'll just need to pm me who you think should win after I close the competition.

Oh and we need to get the discussion out of this thread and into the POTW discussion thread xD.

[Husky]

Everyday the snow falls gracefully.
Mountains of wolves stand tall and proud.
Ominous black wilds stalk the dogs eerily.
Huskies stay put and stand their ground.
Upaithric, sunlight shines alongside the wolves smooth fur.
Sympathetic peanut galleries caw and chirp in awe.
Killers of the pack attack as if they are jets. There is nothing but a blur.
Yet the Huskies courage and bravery leaves the wolves with no choice. They withdraw.
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Meh =/. I typed it up in about 30 minutes. It's supposed to support bravery and courage in battle. Some things I feel like clarifying.

Upaithric = Roofless; open to the sky
The peanut gallery is supposed to be birds in trees.
The story is basically a battle about to being between Huskies and Wolves, two very similar animals.
I put the first line just for a sense of getting imagery.
I had to include Huskies, to support my name xD. Nothing emo though. (Except ominous and eerie.)
It's also a concrete. If you didn't notice, it resembles the slope of a mountain.