Fixed, with a few minor changes. Warn and Form DO rhyme
Same Rhyming scheme as before.
Quote:
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The rhyming scheme is that of an English Sonnet (/ represents a new stanza): a-b-a-b / c-d-c-d / e-f-e-f / g-g |
Summer's Fool
The breeze so sweet, so cool but warm
The sky an endless, cloudless black
Save on the horizon – dawn takes form
Stealing the sky - to take it back
A Coven, in the night looks bleakly
At the stars – The season's fool
The Witches dance is gay and blithely
To celebrate King Holly's rule
The Litha fire burns low and gold
The King of Oak gives up his throne
The dance repeats itself threefold
Till just the children dance alone
So ends our late Midsummer night
With the coming of the morning's light
, I worked hard to finish it by the deadline xD.
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