digital painting #4

[deathphase]

so yeah taking a break from sigs and experimenting with digital painting
i still need a tablet T.T this was done with a mouse



idk but i think im making some good progress P:
there were a few things that i thought i could fix but i just wanted to get the basic idea i had in my head done

NO REFERENCES THIS TIME!!!
i feel accomplished lol
(btw i drew like 4 faces and deleted them before this and my last one xP did not like them)

edit: T.T i just noticed the lighting error on top of the lips GRRRRR
UGH and the nose is angled wrong T.T

[Axed]

Something irks me about this one, it's not as good overall as the others. Maybe because it's bigger. You are, however, amazing at the fur and metal thing on her shirt/coat/whatever. And the hair, even though it looks a little too smudged on the left side.
Nitpicking, I think the whites of the eyes are too bright. If you look at ref pics, the whites mostly tend to look a little yellowy, and definitely not that bright.