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08-28-2008, 06:57 PM
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| Heavenly Good
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: C-Town Age: 16 Posts: 729
GPoints: 1,270 Rep Power: 2 | Redemption? Because my last tag was a disater, I tried my hand at another sprite tag. I used basically the same method as before.  | |
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08-28-2008, 06:58 PM
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| Rich Bitch
Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 1,447
GPoints: 157 Rep Power: 5 | I like this one a lot better. But however I wouldn't continue using the brush to where it adds texture to the picture.
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08-28-2008, 07:01 PM
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| Heavenly Good
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: C-Town Age: 16 Posts: 729
GPoints: 1,270 Rep Power: 2 | i didn't use a brush. what part of the picture are you reffering to? | |
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08-28-2008, 07:02 PM
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| Rich Bitch
Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 1,447
GPoints: 157 Rep Power: 5 | The stuff surrounding the pokemon.
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08-28-2008, 07:09 PM
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| Heavenly Good
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: C-Town Age: 16 Posts: 729
GPoints: 1,270 Rep Power: 2 | oh thats all warped and distorted stuff using noise etc.
& your saying i souldn;t have done that? | |
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08-28-2008, 07:10 PM
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| Rich Bitch
Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 1,447
GPoints: 157 Rep Power: 5 | Well...the stuff around the actual pokemon is not to my liking. The other stuff on the far right looks fine.
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08-28-2008, 07:16 PM
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| Heavenly Good
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: C-Town Age: 16 Posts: 729
GPoints: 1,270 Rep Power: 2 | oh that light green bubbly stuff? | |
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08-28-2008, 11:24 PM
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| OH I LOVE YOU AXEL!
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: IN THE GUMMISHIP WITH AXEL Posts: 1,415
GPoints: 110 Rep Power: 12 | 1. The sprite is looking off the tag, draws attention away
2. The colors are bad
3. The effects are bad
More stuff as well.
Sprites are hard to work with when you are first starting out.
I'd join Planetrenders and read some tutorials and look at psds if you want to continue doing graphics.
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08-29-2008, 05:45 AM
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| The Tempest
Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Purgatory Posts: 4,449
GPoints: 630 Rep Power: 12 | Your composition is really lacking. Looks more like a W.I.P. considering the lack of finishing touches such as lighting, coloring, and effects. I notice a lot of your sigs lack coloring you should work more on that and effects methinks. Your two biggest problems.
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